Roo 2

'Ash' is a cool title! Or what if you altered it a little bit ('Ashes' maybe...?) or incorporated it into the title, so that it wasn't really like her name, ...

Chapters should be however long you want them to be. Some authors have one or two page chapters (like in Holes or The Standby Game), others have "typical" chapter lengths ...

Thank you thank you both! :D Both of you were very helpful and I understand it better now. (Well hopefully ;) ) And Juniper, both sites you gave me were ...

I don't know if I'd read a novel called "Dog Eyes", especially if I knew nothing about it and just saw it on a shelf. Just because I'd probably dismiss ...

So I've spent some time on AgentQuery, reading their tips and "formulas", and I thought I had it down for when I have to write one, but then I read ...

How about: Inner Demons?

Thank you SO much, Sunny, you are a writing-website-god! All of your sites are pure gold, they've all helped me out loads! Thanks again, you deserved to be stickied! :D

I try to come up with the best opening sentence in the world, first thing. Since that sentence could save or kill your reader's interest in the story, it's important. ...

I like 'September's Scars' the best, the alliteration is pretty and the syllables work out nicely. But, suggestion? The 's + Scars makes the title hissy, it might sound a ...